sample draft for essay two
Submitted by bradb on Fri, 04/24/2009 - 12:58.
Last quarter we weren't able to use computers as much, so this is the only draft I can find that gives a sense of what this assignment should look like:
http://bleckblog.org/comp/node/3240/
It's not great by any means, but provides a sense of how one could approach the assignment.
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question about the paper
i dont really understand what this paper needs to be about is it more of a video analysis with some information from a book or is it more about the book with some details from a video?
late question
First, you have to ask questions like this well before the draft is due, not the day it was supposed to be due. Second, be sure you identify yourself in messages. I have no idea who you are. This sort of identification is a common courtesy.
As for the essay, you are to use some idea of Mill's as a springboard to set up the discussion, but after that, it's primarily an analysis of the video, but it will come back to Mill in the conclusion.
Bradley
Question for ya Brad
Are we supposed to cite the website/video we are writing about and how should we do it if we're supposed to? Sorry if you already told us what to do.
slow answer on citations
No need for citations, formal citations that is. The introduction does need to include the name of the video, and the conclusion as well most likely, but that's about it. Bradley