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Tamara's Video Essay
Submitted by anonymous (not verified) on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 08:16
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“ It is only through literature that one can put oneself in someone else’s shoes and understand the other’s different and contradictory sides and refrain from becoming too ruthless” (118). Azar Nafisi, Reading Lolita in Tehran.
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remember to put the page
remember to put the page number before the " (108)." it was all really good it had alot of good ideas and it stayed on topic of the video. you had a lot of major facts throughout this essay on how lerner tells us about these things in the video. it is good that you brought in a quote from lerner herself because you get a feeling of what she is trying to say . one thing i noticed was you started a sentance with the word SO and you dont want to do this because it make it a fragment i beleive. overall it was well written and had many good points. you had a pretty good thesis satement and then you had a couple of good topic statements in the essay as well.