Essay Writing Materials

Workable Writing Process

A Functional Writing Process for this (or any) Class


A Functional
Writing Process for this (or any) Class

Helpful Hints to Think of Before You Begin

  • Set Reasonable Goals: to hold the reader's interest, tell
    a compelling story, to include sensory details in a draft, to maintain a focus
    on what took place, to complete a draft by dinner;
  • Do the Easy Parts First;
  • Make writing a Habit (as long as it is occasional it will
    be awkward and hard);
  • Find a regular Time and Place;
  • Do some Warm-Up Writing before Tackling Your Essay--freewriting;
  • Write Fast;
  • Reward Yourself with Some Short Breaks;
  • If you get stuck, be willing to return to invention strategies
    to generate more ideas.

Prewriting

  1. Decide upon a subject (such as a story about your childhood).
  2. Decide upon a topic using some of the prewriting strategies.

When you have a topic:

  1. Decide on your purpose (rhetorical goal/controlling idea)
    for writing on that topic.
  2. Gather material, using a prewriting/invention strategy.
  3. Select and decide upon best material, which you then organize
    in the most effective manner possible. This is where audience awareness comes
    into play.
  4. Review your pre-writing materials. After giving them a good
    look, put them aside, out of sight. This is a bridge between pre-writing and
    writing.

Drafting

  • Start with a working title. Chances are that if you can't
    come up with some sort of a title you don't know what you want to write about.
    Move on if you are having trouble coming up with a title.
  • You needn't concern yourself with writing the introduction
    first; go right to the heart of the matter and if you need to, right an introduction
    later. When you have a better idea what you are saying, it will be easier
    to introduce the material.
  • Once you begin writing, concentrate on the logical smooth
    flow of ideas and details--move as quickly as possible, with a minimum of
    judgment, while composing the draft. Imagine speaking your draft to someone
    as you compose. You are now forging new and meaningful relations among your
    ideas and information.
  • Your goal with the first draft is to get as much information
    on paper as possible.
  • Ignore spelling, sentence structure, grades, messiness and
    other outside concerns.
  • After you have put all of this to paper, you have completed
    a draft of your essay.

Revision Process

  • It is often best to get some distance between yourself and
    a draft. This entails setting it aside for a day or two. Of course, if you
    are not working ahead you can't do this.
  • Assume new identity: that of reader/editor
  • The process then includes reading your paper to other writers.
    These writers will offer feedback on the strong and weak points they see in
    your paper. You then take this information and use it to improve your essay.
    You will also, if you pay attention, come across strong and weak points in
    the essays that are read to you, and you will be able to use those ideas to
    improve your essay. Have a goal for your revision: clearer, better detail--
  • Make use of the written comments received during peer review.
  • Evaluate your essay before and after going over peer responses.

When on Your Own, Use the Following Revision Process.

  1. First revise for ideas: clarify the main idea. Read through
    your draft. Mark any areas which seem unclear, but don't think about fixing
    them until you've read the whole essay. When finished reading, put the essay
    aside and see if you can write a sentence containing the main idea. Compare
    to the existing thesis/controlling idea. Once you have said it as clear as
    you can, evaluate it for honesty and freshness.
  2. Read the draft again. Evaluate the details. Are they concrete
    and specific? Do they create sensory images? Do they convey the necessary
    message to your audience.
  3. Read the draft again and check the order of your presentation.
    Is it as effective as possible? This is a good place to use outlining.
  4. Revise for word choice. Be sure each word is doing its job
    and carrying its weight. In general, use Anglo-Saxon root words which are
    usually one or two syllables. If you can replace a three-plus syllable word
    with a one or two syllable equivalent, you should do so.
  5. Next revise for mechanics. Use a handbook to check any punctuation
    you are unsure of, or where you commonly make mistakes. This is editing.
  6. Do all of the above as many times as needed.
  • The more you rewrite now, the better you get at it and the
    less you will have to do it in the future.
  • If introduction seems dull, begin with the second paragraph.


Essay Format

Essay Format

General Information Concerning Essay Format

General Format

Titles

Every essay must have a title. The rules for titles are that they use the same font and same font size as the rest of the essay. Capitalize the first, last, and important words in-between. This means you typically capitalize nouns and verbs. You do not capitalize (except if they are the first or last word in the title) articles (the, an, a), prepositions (of, below, near, above, etc.) or conjunctions (and, but, or, etc.). Typically you want the title to contain the main point in the essay, but that point needs to be reduced to three or four words. The title should be centered, but when submitting via email this is often hard to do.

When submitting an essay, the header should look like this:

Your Name

Course

Instructor's Name

Due Date

A Title that Predicts Essay Development

First, every essay will have an introduction, Body, and Conclusion. It is often said that the introduction tells the reader what the essay will tell the reader, the body of the essay tells the reader what the essay is about, and the conclusion tells the reader what the essay just told them.

For the narrative, it might be easier to think of the introduction as the beginning, the body as the middle, and the conclusion as the end.

With the introduction, I am the only reader, as are members of your peer groups, who is required to read your writing. Your job in the first paragraph is to persuade the reader to continue on.

Introduction Basics

  • The Introduction is the first paragraph.
  • Begin with a statement which interests and orients the reader, often referred to as the HOOK.
  • Should introduce topic right away.
  • Should contain thesis statement/controlling idea.

Generalizations about Introductions and Conclusions

  • Need not be parts of the essay indicated by such phrases as "before we begin" or "in conclusion."
  • Introductions and conclusions are more effective if they are thought of in matched pairs.
  • Introductions and conclusions which work in one context can fail in others.

Consider the audience when thinking about the type of introduction/conclusion you are going to use.

  • Introduction should give readers a preview of essay's subject and/or framework. An introduction is not an introduction if it leaves readers clueless about either the subject or the framework.
  • Beginning of the essay introduces the interpreter [author] as well as the interpretation. Present yourself as a person whose judgments and opinions are likely to be valuable.
  • Summarizing in a broad sense is one of the conclusion's main functions. Do not simply restate what you have already said. Rather, place your topic within a larger context.

Introduction and Conclusion Strategies

  • Funnel shaped (inverted pyramid) introduction matched with "web" conclusion. this introduction begins with broad statement related to the topic. Provide background information, each bit more specific than the first--all of which lead to and set up the thesis statement. The Conclusion presents or restates original topic in the context of larger concerns. This is the standard format taught in many writing courses.
  • Build on a scene--show your reader where the narrative will be taking place. Make it interesting. Match with the conclusion built on a parallel scene. This is a particularly good strategy for the narrative essay.
  • Stress the author's attitude in the Introduction, matching that with a conclusion that reflects a change in that attitude--can also deal with emotion, feelings, or ideas.
  • Develop a question in the Introduction matched with a Conclusion that discusses an answer.

Body

  • Develops issues and ideas broached in Introduction.
  • For narrative decide what the climax or high point of the story is and build towards it.

Invention Strategies

How do You Get to a Good Idea?

The progression works like this: I give you a broad subject (tell a story about yourself involving a social issue) and you narrow that down to a topic (working in higher education). That topic must then be narrowed down to something specific element within that topic (teaching with technology perhaps) and then to a specific instance (giving a presentation on the politics of technology that people didn't like). We'll work through this progression in and out of class. Look at the following general guidelines.

  • Strive for the unusual and fresh--the first idea off the top of your head is likely to be trite and dull. Possible example of trite and dull: car crashes and learning how serious driving is.
  • Possible example of fresh: How your driving behavior and attitude towards others changed when you bought an new, late model car.
  • Use your senses.
  • Look at topic from alternative (as in someone other than yourself) points of view.
  • Break stereotypes, unquestioned ideas and slogans. In short, think beyond the obvious.
  • Classify your topic--narrowing in the process.
  • Make bug lists (what really bugs me about this is . . . )

Prewriting/Invention Strategies

You'll find out which of these strategies works best for your by giving them all a try.

Incubation

Jot down ideas whenever they come to you. Compile them for future use. Don't think that you'll remember them if you don't commit them to paper, because you rarely will. Once you jot down the idea, your mind is free to work on it at its own, subconscious leisure. In this way you can arrange your inspiration. Ideas will emerge misshapen and partially developed.

Brainstorming

Talk with a friend or classmate about the assigned topic and what it is you think you need to do. If you have no one around willing to help with this, and you have a tape recorder, talk to the tape recorder for 15 minutes on the subject of your choice and see what kind of topic you come up with.

Clustering

  1. In a word or a phrase, write the topic in the middle of the page and circle it.
  2. Also in a word or a phrase, write down the main parts or central ideas of the topic. Circle these and connect them to the topic in the center.
  3. Generate facts, details, examples, or ideas related in any way to these main parts. Cluster these around the main points.

Listing: works good alone and in groups

  1. Give the list a title that indicates your main idea or topic.
  2. Write as fast as you can, relying on short phrases.
  3. Include anything that seems at all useful. Withhold judgment at this point.
  4. Reflect on the list and organize it to suit your needs.
  5. Put an asterisk by the most promising items.
  6. Number key items in order of importance.
  7. Put items in related groups.
  8. Cross out items that do not seem promising.
  9. Add new items.

Outlining: ordering your lists or clustering topics is a way of outlining

  • Scratch outline: rough list of main points and some sub-points as well:
  • Topic Outlines (written in phrases for each topic):
  • Sentence Outlines (written as complete sentences) follow lettered and numbered format. Sentence outlines are more detailed:

Freewriting/forcedwriting

Sitting down and allowing/forcing yourself to write either on your topic or anything that comes to mind. Freewriting entails sitting down and writing anything about your topic, in the order that it comes out of your brain. You do not edit or censor as your write. Just write without stopping, no matter how silly or off-topic some of the material may seem. Freewriting is often called "forced writing" when done under time constraints. Also called quick drafting--something some students think is a final product. If you stick to your topic, you are Looping.

Writing informally in a journal

Keep a record of interesting impressions, observations, readings, reactions, descriptions, important events and other relevant (to you) experiences. Do not make your journal a record of the day's events: "Dear diary, I got up at seven, had cornflakes for breakfast, and was late getting out the door as I spilled orange juice on the kitchen floor." Instead, record your feelings, thoughts, and ideas: "The same weather beaten woman was standing at the intersection holding out her pandhandling sign. Oddly though, as tends to be the case with her, her clothes were spotless. I wonder how she keeps so clean while living on the street (I assume) and panhandling for a living.

The Pentad: Every human action is influenced by these five elements

  • Act (what): Anything that happens or could happen or is the result of a completed activity.:
  • Scene (where, when): The setting or background of the action;
  • Agent (who): The person or force responsible for or influenced by the action;
  • Agency (how): The method that makes a thing happen;
  • Purpose (why): The reasons or motives for the action.
These elements are useful because they can be used to analyze events, arguments, characters, or audiences, which makes this a particularly effective strategy for narratives, arguments, and the like. They cannot, however, be applied to the analysis of things--such as computers, chairs, or cars.

The Pentad Taken Further

Answering these questions will give you considerable detail for a narrative essay. Develop the answers as fully as possible and you will go a long way toward completing your narrative essay.

  • What is the person doing?
  • How did he/she get involved?
  • What is the person trying to accomplish?
  • How will the person accomplish these goals?
  • What obstacles does the person face?
  • What action is the person trying to take?
  • What other actions are possible?
  • How does the setting, the time of the and others involved in it affect the person's actions?

Cubing

Examining a subject from six perspectives (a cube has six sides). Works best with objects. Does not work as well with human action.
  • Describe the subject. What is its content?
  • Compare it. What is it similar to, different from?
  • Associate it. What does it remind you of?
  • Analyze it. Explain how it was made/came to be.
  • Apply it. Explain how it can be used.
  • Argue for or against it. Take a stand.

Aristotelian Argument Format

Aristotelian Argument Format

  • Introduction

    (includes one or more of the following)

    1. Exordium: The beginning or opening words, designed to win attention and good will by introducing the case in an interesting and favorable light.
    2. Exposition or Narration: An account of the history of the case (what gave rise to the present problem; how the issues developed)
    3. Direct statement of the case (the proposition to be proved or defended--thesis).
    4. Division of Proofs: An outline of how the writer will present the evidence

    Body

    (includes the following)

  • Confirmation of case by presenting evidence in its favor (includes one or more of the following):
    1. facts
    2. reasons
    3. statistics
    4. testimony of experts
    5. opinions supported by facts
    6. reports
    7. examples
    8. logical reasoning (inductive or deductive)
    9. analogy
  • Acknowledge merit of opposing view
  • Refutation of opposing views by demonstrating that they are:
    1. untrue
    2. illogical
    3. self-contradictory
    4. ambiguous (terms not clearly defined)
    5. dishonest ( a deliberate attempt to deceive)
    6. absurd

    Conclusion

    (includes one or more of the following)

    1. Recapitulation and summary of argument: to repeat is to reinforce and make certain readers have not misunderstood.
    2. Peroration: A final, heightened appeal for support.
    3. Propose a solution.

Argument Advice and Guidelines

Argument Advice and Guidelines

Argument is concerned with questions of judgment, not taste

  • Judgment is joined to the logical and reasonable
  • It's best to reveal points often overlooked
  • It's a good idea to define your terms so your audience
    knows exactly what you are talking about. [consult a
    dictionary if you need]

Having a Debatable Point

  • You need an argumentative edge.
  • The main point/assertion--Thesis statement--must be open
    to dispute and able to be viewed from more than one side.
  • Statements of fact are not debatable, neither are
    statements about personal tastes and preferences.
  • A point is Debatable if no amount of reasoning by an
    expert or support by statistics can prove the truth or
    fallacy of the statement.

Supporting the Claim

  • Offer the reader convincing reasons why your position is
    X because of Y.
  • Choose reasons carefully to move your audience
  • If you use outside sources (as this assignment requires),
    choose reliable and authoritative ones.
  • Use hard evidence [facts] and not soft evidence
    [opinion].
  • Conclusions based on soft evidence will often not stand
    up to scrutiny.

To Argue a Point Persuasively You Must do the Following

  • Offer convincing reasons
  • Arguments only as good as the reasons used to support it.
  • You have to make your readers agree with you, or at least
    see the point you are making
  • Use only the best evidence.

Appeal to Reason

Induction

  • Often you will use induction to reach a generalization
    [informed opinion] and then that generalization can be
    used deductively to reach a conclusion.
  • The major premise must be acceptable, minor premise must
    be verifiable, and the argument is not overstated.
  • Induction is from Latin inducere for "to lead,"
    to draw along: reasoning from specific evidence to a
    general conclusion to move from the specific instances to
    the generalizations necessary to make a point and to
    establish the cause or causes of something.
  • The act, process, or result or an instance of reasoning
    from a part to a whole, from particulars to generals or
    from the individual to the universal. Specific instances
    which lead to a generalization.
  • Don't make generalizations too sweeping.

Deduction

  • Applying a proven generalization to a specific case,
    using generalizations to arrive at a specific conclusion.
    .
  • The conclusion is arrived at inductively, so induction is
    used often times to set up deductive arguments.
  • The generalization must be accepted and the specific
    instance must be a fact for the conclusion to be
    accurate.
  • Illogical deductive arguments usually result from a
    faulty major premise or inaccurate generalization.

Syllogism

  • Syllogism comes from the Greek "syllogismos"
    for 'to calculate with words'.
  • A deductive scheme of formal argument consisting of a
    major premise, a minor premise and a conclusion.
  • Moves from general to specific. major premise

Syllogism

If 'A' is True Major Premise/

Generalization
All Humans are Mortal Every Virtue is Laudable
And 'B' is True Minor Premise/

Specific Instance
John is a Human Kindness is a Virtue
'C' Must be True Conclusion John is Mortal Kindness is Laudable

Toulmin Model

  • Combination of inductive and deductive reasoning schemes.
  • Concerned more with probability than certainty. See the
    following examples.

    Claim

  • Equivalent to the conclusion or what the writer wants to
    prove;

    Data

  • The information or evidence a writer offers in support of
    the claim;

    Warrant

  • A general statement that establishes a trustworthy
    relationship between the data and the claim. Leads to
    conclusion that is probably true.
  • Claim and data must be specific/explicit

    Assumptions
    underlie this warrant

  • (such as that the data is valid)
  • Be prepared to back up warrant.

Toulmin Model of Logic

Claim Conclusion Raymond is an American citizen
Data Minor Premise Raymond was born in Puerto Rico
Warrant Major Premise Anyone born in Puerto Rico is an
American citizen

The warrant is false because a French tourist who has a child
while vacatioining in Puerto Rico may chose between American and
French citizenship for their child.

Claim Conclusion Raymond is probably an American
citizen
Data Minor Premise Raymond was born in Puerto Rico
Warrant Major Premise Anyone born in Puerto Rico is entitled
to American citizenship

Here the warrant is accurate given the above information and
the reasoning is logical given the information. The warrant
establishes a trustworthy relationship between the Data and the
Claim.


Distinguish Hard from Soft Evidence

  • Hard evidence equal facts; soft evidence consists of
    opinion.
  • Base conclusions on hard evidence.
  • Avoid showy, deceptive conclusions These seem correct at
    first, but rarely are. Often based on soft evidence or
    ignores important variables--which is why scientific
    studies are done in several populations and placebos are
    given.

Avoid Faulty Generalizations

  • Something true in one case need not be true in all cases:
    Blondes have more fun, television is worthless, money
    buys happiness.
  • Often these are stereotypes.
  • Often are based on insufficient or irrelevant evidence or
    they are too broad and sweeping
  • Often these faulty generalizations are based on
    stereotypes.

Avoid Begging the Question

  • Happens when you assume that a debate's premise
    underlying your assertion has already been demonstrated
    to be true, so you beg your reader to take your word for
    it, trust me you say.
  • You assume what you are arguing to be the case can be
    used as evidence to make that case.
  • Occurs when you assume that a debatable premise
    underlying the point you want to make has already been
    proven.
  • These arguments assume that what the arguer is supposed
    to be proving is already accepted as having been proven.

Avoid Avoiding the Question

  • Often done with an emotional appeal to distract reader
    from the real issue.
  • An appeal to pity, fear, normalcy, flattery, patriotism,
    or snob appeal.
  • Avoids the real issue with material that is irrelevant or
    which clouds the issue by making an irrational appeal to
    the emotions.

Avoid Bandwagon Approach

  • Everyone is doing it, why can't I? Gets readers to agree
    by claiming that everyone else agrees.
  • Following the crowd avoids the real issue.

Avoid Attacking the Opponent

  • Name calling or other derogatory statements about their
    character ignores the real question and exposes a weak
    position.

Avoid Faulty Causal Argument

  • Causes can have more than one effect, so make sure the
    link is solid and demonstrable.
  • Often the result of oversimplification, suggesting
    relationships that don't exist, the ignoring of evidence
    which may run counter to the argument being made, and
    denying the real reasons.

Avoid Imposing Either/Or Fallacy

  • Leaves out all but the extremes of thespectrum.
  • Occurs when the issue is reduced to the two extremes.
  • Eliminates all middle ground because you are either for
    or against.

Proper Appeals to Emotion

  • Such emotional appeals require showing empathy and
    identifying with your reader's feelings.
  • Identify with your opposition's feelings and point of
    view.

Acknowledge Opposing Views

  • Show respect for the opposition and what is valid about
    their argument.
  • Acknowledge the merit of other opinions.

Maintain a Moderate Tone

  • When you act like you are the only authority, then many
    people will be turned off by what you have to say no
    matter how valid and important your material.
  • Don't be belligerent, telling anyone who doesn't side
    with you that they are fools and being duped by the
    opposition.

Recognizing Flaws in Persuasion and Argument

Bogus Claims

  • Claims are bogus or false when the persuader promises
    more than he or she can prove beyond dispute.

Loaded Terms

  • Terms are loaded when they are asked to carry more
    emotional weight than the context can legitimately
    support: Bush regime, Marxist President Salvador Allende,
    Unnecessary adjectives wealthy candidate used to turn the
    unwealthy away from the candidate.

Misrepresentation

  • Lies, twisting what others have said through
    oversimplification
  • Complex argument reduced to ridicule--ask for evidence to
    support claims.
  • Use quotes within their context.

The above Three Terms Represent the Qualities of Propaganda.

Evaluating Sources

Evaluating Source Materials

What Are Outisde Sources?

Outside sources are materials that come from somewhere other than your memory or direct experience. These outside sources often makeup what is considered hard evidence in an argumentative, or other, research essay. These sources include, but are not limited to, books, magazines, academic or professional journals, radio and television shows, films, and the testimony of experts.

How is Reliability and Authority Evaluated in a Source?

Like many things, authority and reliability depends on the source. Because, as a writer, you want to maintain a moderate tone and not drive your readers away, you have to choose your sources wisely. If you were to write an essay about animal testing, there are three (at least) sources of printed information available.

One of the sources is the Humane Society of the United States. The HSUS is a fairly mainstream, conservative organiazation. They tend to work behind the scenes in a low key way. HSUS runs animal shelters, spay and neuter programs, and looks into the treatment of both livestock and pets. The HSUS also engages in traditional political actions such as lobbying Congress.

Another organization and source of information on animals is People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals. PETA is a bit more high profile than HSUS and many prominent people are members. If you have seen the "Don't Wear Fur" campaign where a group of models and moviestars stand behind a banner bearing that proclamation, you have seen some of the information PETA puts out. They are more activist and outspoken than the HSUS, but tend to have pretty much the same goals and act within the law.

Also among those advocating animal rights is the Animal Liberation Front. ALF is among the more radical of animal rights organizations, and if you believe the newspaper reports, they are also more likely to act outside of the law. If you have read stories in the paper about break-ins at research labs where animals are set free, someone holding philosophies similar to ALF's may well have been involved.

These characterizations are meant to show that while people and organizations can have similar goals, they can also have different approaches to achieving those goals. These approaches are products of the biases we all have. As a writer you need to be aware of the biases your sources have. If you are not aware of the biases, your argument may end up being undermined by them. If you are writing an argument to support a ban on animal testing and you know your audience wants to continue testing, which source of information might be the most likely to sway their opinion? The radical or the mainstream? The moderate or the in-your-face? If you can get the same information from a more conservative source, it may have a greater effect on your audience.

More on Reliability and Authority

There are three general categories of journals and magazines and you should understand how they are different.

The first category is written by a generalist for the general public. General consumption news and entertainment magazines fit into this category. Often the writer is someone with no specific training or experience in the topic they are writing about. In a sense they become "instant experts" on their topic as they compose the essay or article. Publications such as Time, Newsweek, Rolling Stone, Ebony, and Esquire fit into this category. These publications will typically contain a good deal of advertising. These publications rely on advertising dollars to sustain themselves and they are in business to turn a profit as well as provide the public with information.

The second category is written by an expert for the general public. This expert may not have specific training in their topic but they may have devoted their career to writing about certain issues, or they may be a professional intheir field but prefer to write to a general audience rather than to or for their peers. Publications such as the Smithsonian, Psychology Today and National Geographic can be considered to fit into this category. These publications usually rely more on subscription dollars than advertising dollars to continue their existance, but there will be some advertising, usually concentrated in the front of the publication.

The third category is written by an expert for other experts. These are typically professional and academic journals. Titles include College English, Teaching English In a Two Year College, Journal of the American Medical Association (JAMA), Lancet (the British version of JAMA), and many more too numerous to list. A quick trip through the library will provide you a quick glimpse of what is available. These publications are nearly devoid of advertising and those advertisements that are there usually are for textbooks and professional studies related to the field that the journal covers. Also, while publication in the first two categories requires the writer to simply please the editor, publication in professional and academic journals requires peer review. Peer review means that the essay was sent to the editor, who inturn sent the essay to reviewers, who critique the manuscript and send it back to the editor and writer for revision. These cycle can be repeated. Essays in professional journals will also contain a complete list of source materials where the articles and essays in the first two categories may or may not name their sources.

Books or Magazines: Which Way Should You Go?

Journals and Magazines are typically more current than books, often making them a better source of information. They also do not require you to read a whole book to get the little bits of information you might be looking for. By the time a book reaches the shelves of a library, it may be as much as two or three years behind current scholarship on the topic. There is a long process of researach, writing, and revision before a book even reaches the mechancial publishing stage where type setting, galley proofing, final publication and distribution can take at least six months. The general rule of thumb is don't use any source that is older than 10 years unless it is a piece of work absolutely critical to a particular field's scholarship.

How About Personal Interviews?

Pesornal Interviews are often one good way to get the testimony of experts. Of course, as you can see by watching news coverage of any trial, you can find an expert to say just about anything you need to be said. Lawyers are a good example to illustrate this: Lawyers are experts in the field of law, but for every lawyer who wins a case, and has presumably made the proper judgement about the law and circumstances in question, there is a lawyer who loses that same case who made a less valid interpretation of the same circumstances.

How About the Internet as a Source?

You've likely heard all of the hype about the Information Superhighway that is the World Wide Web and Internet. And there is as much good information out on the Web as many Net-heads say. However, there is at least as much garbage out on the Web as there is useful information. The problem then becomes how to tell the good from the bad and the ugly. Remember that anyone can put up a web site. AS with any other form of publication there are no editors. Once in awhile aservice provider won't allow certain material on their machines, but that is rare. On the Web, be extra critical of what you see. Along with solid information and scholarship, there are a lot of wackos out there. If you are not sure about the material you find at web sites, use the questioning strategies in the following two links to give you a better idea about the material on any given web site.

Statistics? You Want to Use Statistics?

Mark Twain said "There are lies, damned lies, and statistics." A more recent maxim about statistics is that they are like bikinis: Interesting for what they reveal, but essential for what they cover up. Keep both of these points in mind as you provide your reader with statistics to clarify or support a point in your essay. While statistics can bring certain parts of an argument to light, don't rely on them to make your argument for you and don't use so many of them as to make your essay read like a spread sheet. Your reader won't get your argument if they fall asleep!

Paragraph Guidelines

Paragraph Guidelines

Paragraph Function

Paragraphs give the writer control and the reader access. Paragraphs are often seen as one distinct space for developing one distinct idea.

Length

Depends on writer's purpose and reader's needs. One word to ?

Short paragraphs make for quicker reading, but a choppier flow often results.

Topic Statement

Thesis statement for a paragraph. Asserts a sub-point of the main thesis point. Used to orient the reader to what comes next. Orients the writer to what you are going to say next.

Paragraphs Require

  • Distribution into sentences: Whether there are two or twenty sentences in a paragrah, the sentences must be coherent if you want to have a coherent paragraph.
  • Explicit reference: The bearing of each sentence in the paragraph on the sentences that come before needs to be explicit.
  • Parallel construction: When consecutive sentences illustrate the same idea, they should, as far as possible, be formed alike using parallel contructions.
  • Indication of theme: The opening sentence, unless obviously prepatory, is expected to indicate the scope and subject of the paragraph.
  • Unity: Unity implies a sustained purpose. Sentences should posses a unity that implies a clarity of purpose and forbids digression.
  • Consecutive Arrangement: Related topics should be kept close together. Each sentence should follow the plan of the paragraph in its appropriate place.
  • Marking of subordination: Principle and subordinate elements should have their relative importance clearly indicated.
  • For increased coherence: Repeat key words and phrases.

Updated Version of Paragraph Requirements

  • There must be a central topic idea.
  • Topic development is limited to the paragraph in which the topic is broached.
  • The topic sentence must express the topic idea.
  • Each paragraph must be at least one sentence or a series of sentences.

In each Paragraph, be Conscious of the Ordering of Ideas

  • general to specific: Think of yourself as a camera zooming in on the topic and its details.
  • specific to general: Think of yourself as a camera pulling back from the closeup to get a wider shot.
  • emphatic order (of importance): Could go from most-to-least or least-to-most. It's best to conclude with the information you want to remain most strongly with your reader.
  • spatial: Choose a direction and stick with it. Work from top to bottom, bottom to top, left to right, or what have you.
  • chronological: Begin with what happened first and take it from there.

Most importantly, be consistent with whatever ordering strategy you choose!

Making use of the Toulmin Model of Logic

  • Provide your reader with some general discussion of a point that supports the essay's thesis.
  • Provide an explicit/specific example/detail to illustrate the general discussion.
  • Explain in a few sentences how the explicit/specific example/detail supports the essay's thesis.

Paragraph Elements

General statements: One way to get this sort of information is to visit the DPA website. The site provides factual information about the waste of money that the war on drugs is seen to be. This information can by found by clicking on the “War on Drugs” link along the left hand side of the page. Specific Example(s):Following this link, a reader will find information on the millions of dollars sent to Colombia as part of the war on drugs and how this money is used. The page found by following this link contains such details as how many American soldiers are serving as “Advisers” to the Colombian military, how many helicopters we have sent them, and what those advisers are and are not allowed to do, such as engage in firefights will rebel soldiers and drug growers. Explanatory Link back to thesis: Without this sort of information the American people would not be adequately informed by their government or main stream news media because the issue is complicated and complicated issues don’t get covered well in 30 second sound bites on tv or radio.

Thesis Guidelines and General Examples

Thesis Guidelines

Thesis Guidelines and Examples

  • "Thesis" comes from a Greek word meaning "the act of laying down"
  • A thesis is a proposition that a writera dvances and offers to maintain by argument.
  • A thesis is a concise statement of what the reader should come to believe.
  • A thesis cannot be a statement of fact; it must have an argumentative edge.

A thesis cannot be a sentence fragment; it must be a complete sentence.

poor: How life is in a ghetto.

better: Residents of a ghetto tend to have a higher death rate, a higher infant mortality rate, and a higher unemployment rate than do residents of the suburbs.

A thesis must not be worded as a question. (Usually the answer to a question could be a thesis.)

poor: Do Americans really need large refrigerators?

better: If Americans did their marketing daily, as do most Europeans, they could save energy because they could use smaller refrigerators.

A thesis must not be too broad.

poor: The literature of mythology contains many resurrection stories.

better: One of the oldest resurrection myths is the story of the Egyptian god Osiris.

A thesis should not contain unrelated elements.

poor: All novelists seek the truth, and some novelists are good psychologists.

better: In their attempt to probe human nature, many novelist become excellent psychologists.

A thesis should not contain phrases such as "I think" or "in my opinion" because they weaken the writer's argument.

poor: In my opinion public buildings should be required by law to have no-smoking zones because of the adverse effects on health of "passive smoke."

better: Public buildings should be required by law to have no-smoking zones because of the adverse effects on health of "passive smoking."

A thesis should not be expressed in vague language.

poor: Religion as part of the school curriculum should be avoided because it can cause trouble.

better: Religion as part of the school curriculum should be avoided because each student in a classroom may have a different religion.

A thesis must not be expressed in muddled or incoherent language.

poor: Homosexuality is a status offense to the effect that the participants are willing so that the relationship is voluntary in character rather than the type described in a victim-perpetrator model.

better: Homosexuality between consenting adults should be considered an alternate life-style rather than a crime.

A thesis should not be expressed in figurative language.

poor: The Amazons of today are trying to purge all the stag words from the language.

better: Feminists are trying to eliminate the use of sex-biased words from public documents and publications.

Thesis Composing Process

Composing A Thesis

One Way to Compose A Thesis

Use this process as one way that you can narrow the focus of your essay and come up with something approaching a workable thesis statement.

Subject

The Subject of your essay will typically be part of the assignment. In your first essay (the narrative), the subject was you--the writer. With this second essay, the subject is how someone in your life is important to you.

Topic

Having chosen your subject, the next step is finding a topic that meets the requirements of the assignment. With the narrative you needed to tell a story about yourself that was interesting or important and helped make you the person you are today. Some have written about a parent's illness, mishaps with the police, an accident involving their child, and so on.

With the second assignment you are to make some point about a particular person and their importance in your life.

For the third assignment, let us look at the treatment of the nuclear power industry on the Internet. Notice how we have narrowed the topic from a social issue and its treatment on the Internet to a specific topic: the treatment of the nuclear power industry on the Internet. The next step is developing a purpose for the essay.

Purpose Statement

The essay's purpose is what was referred to as the 'rhetorical goal' in the first assignment's readings. Establishing this goal may be the most important step of composing the essay. Without this goal, it is difficult, if not impossible, to make decisions about such things as whether the chosen details are relevant, whether the essay makes the point you hope for, or whether you are done or not. This is where a purpose statement comes in handy.

Try writing a statement something like this: "The purpose of my essay is to show my classmates and teacher (your intended or assigned audience) that such and such is true." An example follows.

  • The purpose of my essay is to show my classmates and teacher how my father's father is an inspiration to me because of the way he was able to overcome much of the racial prejudice he faced in his life without becoming embittered.
  • The purpose of my essay is to show my classmates and teacher that the Declaration of Independence is a finely crafted document that offers insight to the social and cultural views of the writers, and not just their political views.
  • The purpose of my essay is to show my classmates and teacher that the information on the Internet and World Wide Web concerning the nuclear power industry is unbalanced and those who are pro-nuclear power owe it to the public to provide relevant information in support of the nuclear power industry. To do this, I'll have to describe what the web sites that are pro-nuclear contain while making it clear that they are inadequate to the job.

Thesis

To get a thesis statement from a purpose statment, simply omit the first section of the purpose statement:

  • "The purpose of my essay is to show my classmates and teacher that the information on the Internet and World Wide Web concerning the nuclear power industry is unbalanced and those who are pro-nuclear power owe it to the public to provide relevant information in support of the nuclear power industry."

This leaves us with a thesis statement:

  • "The information on [some particular website found on] the Internet and World Wide Web concerning the nuclear power industry is unbalanced and those who are pro-nuclear power owe it to the public to provide relevant information in support of the nuclear power industry."

This is a statement that readers will most likely either agree or disagree with. Such a thesis statement puts the writer in the place of having to prove their point. The writer and reader can also evaluate each piece of support material in relation to the thesis to gauge its relevancy and importance to the essay and the essay's argument.

 

Tying Evidence to Thesis

When writing an essay that makes a point, that point is typically expressed in the essay's thesis statement. For this course, that thesis is also referred to as the essay's goal, the essay's claim, the essay's controlling idea, or the point of the essay. If you are unsure about your essay’s goal, then check the file "One way to compose a thesis" that includes this material.

Because this thesis is the point that the essay seeks to make or discuss, the material presented in the essay, the evidence and details, should all work to support the thesis. If the evidence/detail does not support the thesis, then it most likely should be cut from the essay.

Often the best way to know if the evidence supports the claim is to explain how the evidence supports the claim. If you cannot construct this explanatory link between the evidence and claim, then it is not likely your reader will either. As the writer, it is your job to construct the links between your evidence and your claims. It is your job to make it as easy as possible for the reader see things your way.

Providing this explanatory link between your data and claim forces the reader to see things your way, at least for as long as they are reading the essay. If you do not provide this link, then either your reader will not make the link you are hoping for or they won't even try to make any link. When you provide the link, as the writer, you have greater control over the response of the reader.

In brief, a outline of the essay would look like this:

  1. Introduction
    • thesis
  2. point 1 generalization and evidence
    • explanation as to how evidence supports thesis in the same paragraph
  3. point 2 generalization and evidence
    • explanation as to how evidence supports thesis in the same paragraph
  4. point 3 generalization and evidence
    • explanation as to how evidence supports thesis in the same paragraph and so on until the conclusion

  5. Provide as many points as necessary within the assigned length of the essay.
  6. Conclusion that drives home the point of the essay
  7. Keep this in mind as you are working on the essay and revisions.

    Citation Guidelines

    Modern Language Association Stylesheet

     


    Newspaper || Magazines || Journals || Books || Anthologies || References || Electronic Sources


    NEWSPAPER

    Unsigned Article

    On the Works Cited page, give the title of the article "in quotes," the name of the newspaper underlined or italicized, the day, month, and year if the article's publication, a colon, and the section and page's name underlined or italicized, the volume number, the year (in parentheses), and the inclusive page numbers of the article.

    Smith, John. "The Rising Cost of Peanut Butter Has Consumers Going Nuts." Psychology Today Jan. - Feb. 1996: 23-25.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name and page number on which the quoted material appears in the journal.

    (Smith 24)

     

    Signed Article

    On the Works Cited page, do the same as above but put the author’s name first. Note that the name is in reverse order. Also note that if the newspaper’s name does not give the city of origin, you put the city in [brackets] after the name.

    Smith, John. “The Rising Cost of Peanut Butter Has Consumers Going Nuts.” Daily Bugle [Los Angeles] 29 Feb. 1996: A1+.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author’s last name and the section and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the paper.

    (Smith A1)

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    MAGAZINES

    Weekly

    On the Works Cited page, give the author’s name, the title of the article “in quotes,” the name of the magazine underlined or italicized, the day, month and year of the article’s publication , a colon, and the inclusive page numbers of the article.

    Smith, John. “The Rising Cost of Peanut Butter Has Consumers Going Nuts.” Newsweek 29 Feb.

    1996: 23-25.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author’s last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the magazine.

    (Smith 23)

    Monthly

    On the Works Cited page, give the author’s name, the title of the article “in quotes,” the name of the magazine underlined or italicized, the months and year of the article’s publication, a colon, and the inclusive page numbers of the article.

    Smith, John. “The Rising Cost of Peanut Butter Has Consumers Going Nuts.” Texas Monthly Feb. 1996: 23-25

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author’s last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the magazine.

    (Smith 24)

    Bimonthly

    On the Works Cited page, give the author’s name, the title of the article “in quotes,” the name of the magazine underlined or italicized, the months and year of the article’s publication, a colon, and the inclusive page numbers of the article.

    Smith, John. “The Rising Cost of Peanut Butter Has Consumers Going Nuts.” Psychology Today Jan. - Feb. 1996: 23-25

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author’s last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the magazine.

    (Smith 24)

     

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    JOURNALS

    Journal with Continuous Pagination

    On Works Cited page, give the author’s name, the title of article "in quotes," the journal’s name underlined or italicized, the volume number, the year (in parentheses), and the inclusive page numbers of the article.

    Smith, John. "The Rising Cost of Peanut Butter Has Consumers Going Nuts." Journal for the Spread of Peanut Butter 22 (1996): 23-25.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author’s last name and page number on which the quoted material appears in the journal.

    (Smith 24)

    Journal Paging each Issue Separately

    After giving the journal’s name, include volume number and issue number, year (in parentheses), and page numbers.

    Smith, John. "The Rising Cost of Peanut Butter Has Consumers Going Nuts." Journal for the Spread of Peanut Butter 22.3 (1996) : 23-25.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author’s last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the journal.

    (Smith 24)

    Journal that Uses only Issue Numbers

    After giving the journal’s name, include issue number, year (in parentheses), and page numbers.

    Smith, John. "The Rising Cost of Peanut Butter Has Consumers Going Nuts." Journal for the Spread of

    Peanut Butter 3 (1996) : 23-25.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author’s last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the journal.

    (Smith 24)

    Journal Paging each Issue Separately

    After giving the journal's name, include volume number and issue number, year (in parentheses), and page numbers.

    Smith, John. "The Rising Cost of Peanut Butter Has Consumers Going Nuts." Journal for the Spread of Peanut Butter 22.3 (1996) : 23-25.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the journal.

    (Smith 24)

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    BOOK

    One Author

    On the Works Cited page, give the author's name, the book's title underlined or italicized, the city of publication, a colon, the publisher, and the year of publication.

    Smith , John. The Great Peanut Butter War. New York: Houghton, 1996.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    (Smith 24)

    Two or Three Authors

    On the Works Cited page give the names of the authors in the order presented on the cover. All other information is the same as with one author. Note that the second author's name is not reversed.

    Smith, John, and Jane Doe. The Great Peanut Butter War Revisited. New York: Houghton, 1996.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last names and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    (Smith and Does 24)

    More than Three Authors

    On the Works Cited page, give only the name of the first author and then the designation et al. To stand for the others. All other information is the same as with one author. Note that if a subtitles given on the cover, it appears after the main title, separated by a colon.

    Smith, John, et. al. The Great Peanut Butter War: The Jelly and Honey Battles. New York: Houghton, 1996.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name, the designation et al., and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    (Smith et al. 24)

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    ANTHOLOGY

    On the Works Cited page, give the author’s name, the title of work ("in quotes" if it is a short story, poem, or essay; underlined or italicized if it is the name of a novel or a play), the title of the anthology underlined or italicized, the editor of anthology, the volume number (if necessary), the city of publication, a colon, the publisher, the year of publication, and inclusive page numbers of the work as it appears in the anthology.

    Smith, John. "Ode to Peanut Butter." The Norton Anthology of Peanut Butter Literature. Ed. P. Brittle. Vol. 2. New York: Houghton, 1996. 34-36.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    (Smith 35)

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    REFERENCE SOURCES

    Signed Article

    For a reprinted article excerpt in Contemporary Literary Criticism, Twentieth Century Literary Criticism, Nineteenth Century Literary Criticism, Short Story Criticism, Poetry Criticism, Drama Criticism, Literary Criticism from 1400 to 1800, and Classical and Medieval Literary Criticism, use the anthology format.

    Bayley, John. "Return of the Native." Contemporary Literary Criticism. Ed. Jean C. Stine and Daniel Marowski. Vol. 31. Detroit: Gale, 1985. 260-261.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    (Bayley 260)

    For signed articles in the Dictionary of Literary Biography follow the anthology format.

    Keating, H. R. F. "Agatha Christie." Dictionary of Literary Biography. Ed. Bernard Benstock and Thomas F. Staley. Vol. 27. Detroit: Gale, 1989. 68-82.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    (Keating 68)

    To cite articles from the Opposing Viewpoint series include the name of the author of the article, title of article "in quotation marks," series title underlined or italicized, editor, place of publication, publisher’s name and year of publication, and page numbers for article you are citing.

    Sullum, Jacob. "The Death Penalty Is Just." The Death Penalty: Opposing Viewpoints. Ed. Carol Wekesser. San Diego: Greenhaven Press, 1991. 57-60.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    (Sullum 57)

    Unsigned Article

    For unsigned biographical information in CLC, TCLC, NCLC, SSC, PC, LC,CMLC, use the following format.

    "Czeslaw Milosz." Contemporary Literary Criticism. Ed. Jean C. Stine and Daniel G. Marowski. Vol. 31. Detroit: Gale, 1985. 258-259.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the title of the entry "in quotes" and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    ("Czeslaw Milosz" 258)

    For unsigned articles in Contemporary Authors use the following format.

    "Joel Williamson." Contemporary Authors. Ed. Donna Olendorf. Vol. 144. Detroit: Gale, 1994. 487

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the title of the entry "in quotes" and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    ("Joel Williamson" 487)

    For unsigned articles in Contemporary Authors New Revision Series use the following format.

    "Maud Hart Lovelace." Contemporary Authors New Revision Series. Ed. Susan M. Trosky. Vol. 39 Detroit: Gale, 1992. 240-241.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the title of the entry "in quotes" and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the book.

    ("Maud Hart Lovelace." 240)

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    ELECTRONIC SOURCES

    WWW (World Wide Web) Sites

    To cite files from the World Wide give the author's name (if known), the full title of the web page quoted from "in quotation marks," the title of the web site's homepage (from the window bar) underlined or in italics, the full http address, and the date of visit (in parentheses).

    American Dental Association. "Fluorides and Fluoridation." Facts About Fluoride.Http://www.ada.org/consumer/fluoride/articles/fa01.html. (10 Feb. 1997).

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name ( or an abbreviation if written by a corporate author with a long name) and the page number on which the quoted material appears on a printout of the web page. Look at the beginning of the web page or at the very end (see whose name follows the © symbol) to locate the author.

    (American Dental Association 2)

    Expanded Academic ASAP

    Entries from an electronic online journal should include: name of the author (if given), title of the document "in quotation marks," title of the journal underlined or italicized, volume number, issue number or the identifying number, year or date of publication (in parentheses), number of pages or paragraphs (if given) or n.pag ("no pagination"), publication medium (Online), name of the computer network, and date of access.

    Galston, William. "Divorce American Style." The Public Interest 124 (Summer 1996) : 15 pp. Online. Expanded Academic ASAP. 11 Feb. 1997.

    When giving the parenthetical citation in the body of the paper, include the author's last name and the page number on which the quoted material appears in the printout of the information.

    (Galston 3)

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    Thanks to Todd Moffett of the English Department at The Community College of Southern Nevada for this material.

    Conducting Research Online

    This assignment calls for the use of outside research. Thankfully the library at SFCC has a lot of online resources. You will need to log-in to use these resources. Typically your user name will be your student number.

    SFCC Library: Electronic Resources contains a database called ProQuest. proQuest contains magazine and journal articles of a more scholarly sort. You can start your search by using your author's name and then narrow it down from there if necessary. The best articles, the most reliable information, is found in the scholarly publications. Trade magazines can be good, as can magazines in general. newspapers tend to be the least helpful, but you never know. Click on the Proquest link found on the Electronic Resources page.

    Literary Databases also contain a good deal of relevant information on the various authors. Within these articles, you may find some information relating to some point you are working to develop.

    SFCC's Book Catalog may also be of help, but you'll want to get to campus to pick up books. I'm not sure how fast they are about getting books out to rural areas.

    Essay Draft Response Questions

    Essay Peer Draft Evaluation Questions

    Answer each of the below questions for essays written by each of your book club members (the five member group(s) need respond to just three of their group members' essays--just be sure everyone gets three). Please complete your responses by the stated deadline.


    • What about the introduction interests and orients you as a reader? At this point, why would you (not) continue reading this essay if you did not have to? Is there a particular introduction strategy you can recommend to the writer, such as an anecdote, a history of the issue, something along those lines, that might better get a reader's attention and provide an indication of the topic and where the essay will be going? If so, provide that suggestion.
    • Write down what you see as the essay's thesis. Why is the thesis appropriate for the assignment? Explain what you see about the point as being debatable.
    • Can you suggest a way to better focus the topic and thesis? Is this a fresh/engaging look at the topic? If not, suggest a fresh perspective to the writer.
    • Based on your reading of the essay, what needs to be emphasized?
    • Based on your reading of the essay, what seems to be missing or understated?
    • Based on your reading of the essay, what is hinted at but not made clear? How might this material be made clearer? Give the writer some suggestions if this need exists.
    • What evidence (from either the text or the expected research) in the paper supports the writer's assertions? How well does the writer make use of this evidence? Do you see any logical inconsistencies regarding the use of evidence? If so, offer a way to correct those you see.
    • Explain why/how the writer does (not) persuade you to accept their point.
    • Are there any mechanical errors that need revision? Show the author the most glaring errors. However, do not edit the paper for them.
    • If you were to change one thing in this paper, suggest that change to the writer.

    Literary Theories

    These brief encapsulations of several literary theories might provide a way for you to look at your chosen text beyond the general assignment tasks.

    Pragmatism is a collection of many different ways of thinking. Most of the thinkers who describe themselves as pragmatists point to some connection with practical consequences or real effects as vital components of both meaning and truth. Some pragmatists object to the view that beliefs represent reality and argue that beliefs are dispositions which qualify as true or false depending on how helpful a disposition proves in accomplishing the believer's goals. For this type of pragmatist it is only in the struggle of intelligent organisms with the surrounding environment that theories acquire meaning, and only with a theory's success in this struggle that it becomes true. Pragmatists do not hold that anything that is practical or useful, or that anything that helps to survive merely in the short-term, should be regarded as true. Instead, most of them argue that what should be taken as true is that which contributes the most good over the longest course.

    Deconstruction is used to denote a philosophy of meaning that deals with the ways that meaning is constructed and understood by writers, texts, and readers. One way of understanding the term is that it involves discovering, recognizing, and understanding the underlying — and unspoken and implicit — assumptions, ideas, and frameworks that form the basis for thought and belief. It has various shades of meaning in different areas of study and discussion, and is, by its very nature, difficult to define without depending on "un-deconstructed" concepts. Deconstruction is neither an analysis, a critique, a method, an act, nor an operation, but an attempt to demonstrate that Western thought has not satisfied its quest for a "transcendental signifier" that will give meaning to all other signs.

    Feminist literary criticism is informed by feminist theory, or by the politics of feminism more broadly. In the most general and simple terms, feminist literary criticism before the 1970s -- the first and second waves of feminism -- was concerned with the politics of women's authorship and the representation of women's condition within literature. With the more complex conceptions of gender and subjectivity and third-wave feminism, feminist criticism has taken a variety of new routes. It has considered gender in the terms of existing relations of power, and as a concrete political investment. While it has been closely associated with the birth and growth of queer studies, the more traditionally central feminist concern with the representation and politics of women's lives remains.

    Formalism/New Criticism: While these two schools are separate and distinct, they can also be looked at together as both privledge the text itself over what goes into the making or reading of the text. They sometimes refers to inquiry into the form (rather than the content) of works of literature, such as plot, genre concerns (such as with a captivity narrative) but usually refers broadly to approaches to interpreting or evaluating literary works that focus on features of the text itself (especially properties of its language) rather than on the contexts of its creation (biographical, historical or intellectual) or the contexts of its reception. Adherents were/are emphatic in their advocacy of close reading and attention to texts themselves, and their rejection of criticism based on extra-textual sources, especially biography.

    Marxist criticism is a loose term describing literary criticism informed by the philosophy and/or the politics of Marxism. The simplest goals of Marxist literary criticism can include an assessment of the political "tendency" of a literary work, determining whether its social content or its literary form are "progressive"; however, this is by no means the only or the necessary goal. Marxist literary critics have also been concerned with applying lessons drawn from the realm of aesthetics to the realm of politics. Marxist criticism can be about identifying the class struggle within a text.

    New Historicism is an approach to literary criticism and theory based on the premise that a literary work should be considered a product of the time, place and circumstances of its composition rather than as an isolated creation of genius. It had its roots in a reaction to the "New Criticism" of formal analysis of works of literature that were seen by a new generation of professional readers as taking place in a vacuum. New Historicists aim simultaneously to understand the work through its historical context and to understand cultural and intellectual history through literature, which documented the new discipline of the history of ideas. Michel Foucault based his approach both on his theory of the limits of collective cultural knowledge and on his technique of examining a broad array of documents in order to understand the episteme of a particular time. New Historicism is claimed to be a more neutral approach to historical events, and is sensitive towards different cultures.

    Post-colonialism (also known as post-colonial theory) grapples with the legacy of colonial rule. As a literary theory or critical approach it deals with literature produced in countries that were once, or are now, colonies of other countries. It may also deal with literature written in or by citizens of colonizing countries that takes colonies or their peoples as its subject matter. Post-colonialism deals with many issues for societies that have undergone colonialism: the dilemmas of developing a national identity in the wake of colonial rule; the ways in which writers from colonized countries attempt to articulate and even celebrate their cultural identities and reclaim them from the colonizers; the ways knowledge of colonized people have served the interests of colonizers, and how knowledge of subordinate people is produced and used; and the ways in which the literature of the colonial powers is used to justify colonialism through the perpetuation of images of the colonized as inferior. The creation of binary oppositions structure the way we view others. Such opposition was used to justify a destiny to rule on behalf of the colonizer, or 'white man's burden'.

    Psychoanalytic literary criticism is criticism which, in method, concept, theory or form, is influenced by the tradition of psychoanalysis begun by Sigmund Freud. The object of psychoanalytic literary criticism, at its very simplest, can be the psychoanalysis of the author or of a particularly interesting character. In this directly therapeutic form, it is very similar to psychoanalysis itself, closely following the analytic interpretive process discussed in Freud's Interpretation of Dreams. The concepts of psychoanalysis can be deployed with reference to the narrative or poetic structure itself, without requiring access to the authorial psyche (an interpretation motivated by Lacan's remark that "the unconscious is structured like a language").

    Reader-response criticism is a literary theory that arose in response to the textual emphasis of New Criticism from the 1940s to the 1960s in the West. New Criticism had emphasized that only that which is within a text is part of the meaning of a text. No appeal to the authority or intention of the author, nor to the psychology of the reader, was allowed for the most orthodox New Critics. Reader-response criticism is a group of approaches to understanding literature that have in common an emphasis on the reader's role in the creation of the meaning of a literary work. Reader-response theory recognizes the reader as an active agent who imparts "real existence" to the work by reading it and completes its meaning "by applying codes and strategies". It is concerned with the reader's contribution to a text. It stands in total opposition to the text-oriented theories of formalism and the New Criticism, in which the reader's role interpreting literary works are not taken into account. In general, one can group reader-response theorists into three groups: those who focus upon the reader's experience and psychology, those who concentrate on the linguistic and rhetorical dynamic of audience, and those who concentrate on readers as cultural and historical ciphers.

    Structuralism is an approach to analysing narrative material by examining the underlying invariant structure. For example, a literary critic applying a structuralist literary theory might say that the authors of the West Side Story did not write anything "really" new, because their work has the same structure as Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet. In both texts a girl and a boy fall in love (a "formula" with a symbolic operator between them would be "Boy +LOVE Girl") despite the fact that they belong to two groups that hate each other ("Boy's Group -LOVE Girl's Group") and conflict is resolved by their death. The versatility of structuralism is such that a literary critic could make the same claim about a story of two friendly families ("Boy's Family +LOVE Girl's Family") that arrange a marriage between their children despite the fact that the children hate each other ("Boy -LOVE Girl") and then the children commit suicide to escape the arranged marriage; the justification is that the second story's structure is an 'inversion' of the first story's structure: the relationship between the values of love and the two pairs of parties involved have been reversed. Structuralistic literary criticism argues that the "novelty value of a literary text" can lie only in new structure, rather than in the specifics of character development and voice in which that structure is expressed.

    Type any of the above terms into wikipedia.org and you'll see where I got my summaries, and then some.

    Summarizing

    Summarizing

    Summarizing what you read

    1. Find the Topic
      • Ask yourself, what is the article/essay/chapter about?
        • To answer that question, preview the text by reading the title, sub-titles, boldface headings and any other headings that may have been used.
        • If you don't have the topic after that, read the first and last paragraphs.
        • If you still don’t have the topic, read the first sentence of the remaining paragraphs.
    2. Locating and Stating the Main Idea
      • Ask yourself, what is the author’s main point on the topic?
        • To answer, preview by reading the title, sub-titles, boldface heading and any other headings. Look at any charts or graphs provided. Read the first sentence of each paragraph and the entire first and last paragraphs.
        • If you find a sentence that appears to state the main idea, underline and make a note in the margin.
        • Using your own words, write the main idea down in a complete sentence.
    3. Identifying the Major Details
      • Ask yourself, how does the author support the main idea?
        • Preview the article to find the topic and main idea.
        • Look for signal words and phrases that help identify major details. Signal words and phrases are, for example, first (or second, or third, etc.), for example, on the other hand, in contrast, finally.
        • Break longer works into sections. Read the first line of every paragraph to help determine where to break up the sections.
        • Determine the main idea of each section; the main idea of a section is usually a major detail within the larger text.
        • Label each section by writing the topic of that section in the margin.
    4. Composing the Summary
      • Opening sentence should contain text’s title, author’s name, and the main idea. (Don't worry about this one for journal entries.)
      • Provide major details of the text by changing the major detail phrases into complete sentences.
      • Provide minor details as needed/allowed to explain or clarify the major details (don’t include minor details in précis summary).
      • Must be written primarily in your own words. More than three words from the original requires use of quote marks. Do not string together a series of quotes.
    5. Responding
      • Record your first reactions to the ideas in the text and how they were expressed.
        • What did you learn that was new?
        • What was reinforced that you already knew?
        • How does any of this fit with your existing beliefs?

    Summary must be devoid of summarizer’s stated opinion, must maintain perspective and proportion of original, but must be in summarizer’s own words.

    Adapted from Read and Respond by Swinton and Agoposowicz