Sonnet 127

I found this poem rather intriguing when I read through it. It is of the 'dark lady' collection but i'd say is a little more merciful. Instead of tearing her down to the bare bone, he tears the people who create artificial attraction. Starting off,

"In the old age black was not counted fair,
Or if it were, it bore not beauty’s name."

if black was beautiful it wouldn't have the name of beauty at all. And rather in this age now, everyone has tried to seize beauty through cosmetics. Since beauty has been grasped through artificial means no one is really 'beautiful'. Therefore in the poem, saying her eyes are raven-black, that in the end everyone will say that's the way beauty is.

"At such who, not born fair, no beauty lack,
Sland'ring creation with a false esteem.
  Yet so they mourn, becoming of their woe,
  That every tongue says beauty should look so."

In telling that real beauty is what sets people a part. The system of which people shouldn't have to re-create themselves.

great sonnet

I also like the way this poem stays free from chastising people. i think that the worse this sonnret gets is wher it says..."and beauty slandered with a bastard name." Do you think that whomever this sonnet is refering to might have been born out of wedlock?" what do you think is being spoken of in line 12. It could be false faces we paint on with makeup to hide our natural exterior physical flaws. have you considered that perhaps he may be refering to mask of personas that we put forth in certain situations to either protect ourselves or turn a bad scenerio into a better a situation?

good close read

i agree with you. i felt that shakespeare really did take the dark lady's beauty and explain it as something more. Back in their day, maybe she wasn't considered as beautiful but shakespeare was ahead of his time as saw that there is always more than the standards and that we can't abide by the standards because we worry too much about what people think instead of just loving ourselves for being born this way.

beauties standards

This is a good point that you bring up.Obviously in the sixteenth century there were no televisions, modeling magazines or pageants to pursuade a person that they had to look a paticular way.Yet beauty seems to be a thing like cockrouches.It definatly has continued to live on thru time. Notice how looking beautiful was not just a thing for women.The majority of men used facial makeup along with wearing their curly wigs. Some men even wore attire other than pants.Vanity ia often a theme in the sonnets. Could it be vanity which shakespeare talks about in this sonnet as the disgrace?

"Sweet beauty hath no name, no holy bower,
But is profaned, if not lives in disgrace."

I really love this sonnet,

I really love this sonnet, because it doesn't involve a yearning for someone, or even a strong hatred. It's simply an opinion of beauty. I read the translation of this to get a better idea, and it's really interesting how in-depth Shakespeare goes. He ends up saying that beauty, once natural, has become artificial - sort of bridging the gap between the truly beautiful and the truly ugly, which disgraces the definition of beauty itself because people are indistinguishable. You'd think that beauty wouldn't be so important, because looks don't matter if you're just looking for sex, as Shakespeare has illustrated to us in some of his other sonnets. But, it all makes sense that beauty also has a deeper meaning of good versus bad personalities. In some way, maybe Shakespeare was trying to say that the line between the innocent and the guilty are blurred, when really everyone should look at the real goddess which is his mistress, and follow her example?

beauty does matter

Even if the poet is just looking for sex, he is probably going to look for someone to have sex with that will make him feel good about doing it, and I think that for most people, that means someone they are attracted to. That seems to be how this poem works. He is attracted to this "black beauty" who does not fit the conventional standard of beauty. What matters is that he finds her beautiful. You and I may not agree with this, or the two of you may disagree with me, on the actual "beauty" of this person, but as long as one person is attracted to another, beauty will matter. I think that's the first level of attraction in sexual reproduction because to some degree beauty and health are closely parallel.

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Bradley

I should say . . .

That beauty and health are seen as being closely parallel, probably then and now, though we have different notions of beauty.

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Bradley

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I see where your coming from. I find this poem to go deeper beyound a lot of means. and I like to tear deeper into it.

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