Trapped in Love: Sonnets 78, 80, 81, 88
Throughout all the sonnets, it appears that Shakespeare is sickened or worn down by love for the OOP and his jealousy of the attention the OOP may receive from others. I feel as if he is pining over the OOP, hence all the sonnets. Shakespeare appears to be trapped by his undying love for the OOP, maybe even to the point of obession. Again, we see that Shakespeare vows to immortalize the OOP through his poetry in sonnet 81. However he acknowledges that there are many others that are now quite taken with the OOP, but Shakespeare, being modest in his self-description, writes, "Your shallowest help will hold me afloat" signifying that all he needs in life would be the OOP, no matter how little of them he may receive. In sonnet 78, where Shakespeare writes of how all credit for his work and success should go to the OOP for being such an inspiration, again it shows how important the OOP is to Shakespeare and I think that is what he is trying to convey through the poetry. He may be trying to make a very strong impression on the OOP of how much he actually loves or relies on them for inspiration and fulfillment. Also, I think that Shakespeare is obviously trying to show the OOP that he is willing to do anything for him, which relates to the idea proposed in class earlier that Shakespeare is exhibiting a selfless love for the OOP. Shakespeare writes in sonnet 88 lines 1-4, "When thou shalt be disposed to set me light,/And place my merit in the eye of scorn,/Upon thy side against myself I'll fight,/And prove thee virtuous, though thou art forsworn," which again proves how utterly devoted he is to the OOP. I think that Shakespeare is bound so strongly to his feelings for the OOP and that is what he is trying to explain to the OOP and the reader.


a new twist
There is something of a new twist being introduced by these poems, a rival poet. This is where scholars come up with the thought that Shakespeare is writing these sonnets in hope of receiving some patronage, the financial support needed to stay alive. It was common, required of most artists at the time, to have a patron, someone who footed the bill because writing wasn't sold on the open market as it was today. This need was alleviated somewhat by the money brought in by the plays and playhouse, but we might be in a situation where another poet is angling for the financial support Shakespeare has been angling for with the sonnets. Bradley
Bradley
I agree with both of you
I agree with both of you that Shakespeare is obsessed...he did write 155 sonnets about one person, which takes quite a lot of thought and deliberation!
I hadn't thought about how much Shakespeare relies on the OOP before. That was an excellent point Veronica, and the quote you used to back it up supported it perfectly. You've convinced me.
-Hilary
Pining..
Veronica,
I completely agree. These sonnets really convey that Shakespeare was really pining over this young man, and seemed practically obsessed. It seems that he would give up everything for this person, even scorn himself because the love he feels is so strong. It seems that every aspect of his life was altered because of this young man.