well i had some initial difficulties getting this off the ground right from the start in trying to immediatly make it in sonnet form, so instead i started in freeverse and let it see where it would take me. heres how that came out.

Thou fleet of paw, shimmering wonder
of silver and cyan charm, with but a
glance you can melt away all concerns
with your collected carefree eyes.
swift in combat but light on your feat,
master of elements that you are, moon to
sun, fire to water, electricity to earth,
ice to earth and back again to the rainbow.
what dark tempests your heart clears away,
and brings those carefree smiles to our eyes.
black is the day, when you bring not smiles
but frowns in your wake at your appearence.
fleet of paw, glittering silver and
cyan, thou art keeper of my happiness.

From there i had a pretty good idea on how i wanted it to semi follow, so i then went and checked out sonnet composition and settled on using the petrarchan sonnet style for my second. had to use a dictionary a couple of times and a rhyme generator but in the end i found that it turned out very pleasing to my eyes and my ears, so im happy with it. hope you enjoy it.

Your fleet of paw, silver-cyan charm
of elemental mastery, from moondark
to sunbright, is let known that your bark,
will never bring my happiness harm.
Your carefree eyes, rebound the love
and clear the black tempest of my soul.
The wavewashed, blacksanded beach shoal
that fit my tastes like a well made glove;
both bring my joy from the ground to sky
never can or will my warmth amount to nigh
when you are near. For with but a glance
you bring my happiness, leaving not a chance
for frowning to pass me by and leave me tart.
You silver-cyan friend, you keeper of my heart.